Park Hill Writing Hall of Fame

At Park Hill Primary School, we always challenge the children in their writing. We celebrate children who are focused on improving their work and being the best they can be. Welcome to our Writing Hall of Fame, illustrating the best work from around the school!

Persuasive writing in 5MP

In English this week, we have been learning how to write a persuasive letter. The children wrote to Mr Griffin persuading him how important it is to maintain the daily mile.

Watch out Sir Hurricane’s about! by Isabella

Isabella from 5D has been writing in the style of Roald Dahl. Poor Heather Tinsel encounters the formidable Sir Hurricane – ‘ the familiar dead black eyes looked at her only this time they were ablaze with anger’ read on to find out what happens next!

Watch out- here comes Miss Trunchbull ! 5D

The children are enjoying reading Matilda by Roald Dahl. Here is some super writing including description and dialogue.


The children have really enjoyed reading Roald Dahl’s book: Matilda. They have produced some great writing from it in English.  

Fantastic Writers!

In Year Six, we have been looking at the text Street Child. We have been looking at key events within the story. In our writing, we have tried to step into the role of the main character, Jim. I have been really impressed with the children’s stamina with writing and their editing skills. Well done! […]

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